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Sunday, November 8

  1. page The Six Senses edited ... sense poem. I had to think of a scene and then write about my body would be thinking about. …
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    sense poem. I had to think of a scene and then write about my body would be thinking about. Enjoy.
    I see the dark stormy sky over head,
    I smell the thick salty air and the wet grass around me,
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  2. page Picture Perfect edited ... in a picture. I had to choose a picture that wasn't too busy, and then write about what was …
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    in a picture. I had to choose a picture that wasn't too busy, and then write about what was happening in the picture, or what I thought was going to hapen in the picture, or what I thought had just happened in the picture.
    Thud, thud, thud,
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    horses hooves sweep
    sweep
    over the
    Leaving a trail of dust. {897114477_7f537e9e91.jpg}
    Thud, Thud, Thud.
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    delicatley moves, like
    like
    a leaf
    Swirling and dancing.
    Thud, Thud, Thud.
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  3. page The Magic of Words edited I am going to write some These are small, short ... in people. They use words that mean the sa…
    I am going to write someThese are small, short
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    in people. They use words that mean the same thing, but are different. I started by get a words and finding other words that mean the same thing. Then I would write a small, short sentence about the word I picked, with the last word of that sentance rhyming with the last word of the sentance before that.
    LOVE
    Adoration, Tenderness, Passion, Devotion, Fondess.
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Wednesday, November 4

  1. msg Poetry message posted Poetry HI Sheridan, I enjoyed visiting your wiki. Your poetry is good, you have good range of vocab. Can…
    Poetry
    HI Sheridan,
    I enjoyed visiting your wiki. Your poetry is good, you have good range of vocab.
    Can you tell me what you have learned from this?

    Can you please link this wiki to your etw book? I will complete the assessment as well.

    Mrs M
    3:36 pm
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  3. msg Under the sea message posted Under the sea (deleted)
    2:59 pm
  4. page Under The Sea edited ... Safe from predators. Under the sea, {fish_7.jpg} {fish_8.jpg} ... turtles swim, {fish_9…
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    Safe from predators.
    Under the sea, {fish_7.jpg} {fish_8.jpg}
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    turtles swim, {fish_9.jpg}
    Grey dolphins dance and play,
    Whales sing and bellow,
    And sharks patrol their territoy.
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    Under
    Under the Sea, {fish_11.jpg} {fish_12.jpg}
    Small crabs scuttle over sand,
    Shells lay deserted,
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    And above the ocean,
    A beautiful sunset rests.
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    I used Personificion in this poem, as I described the sea grass dancing and swaying.

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  5. msg Under the sea message posted Under the sea I love this poem Sheridan, very imaginative, i can see the fishes in the seaweed, love the pics!! …
    Under the sea
    I love this poem Sheridan, very imaginative, i can see the fishes in the seaweed, love the pics!!

    Hayley
    2:58 pm
  6. page Under The Sea edited ... And above the ocean, A beautiful sunset rests. I really like your choice of poem Sheridan, …
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    And above the ocean,
    A beautiful sunset rests.
    I really like your choice of poem Sheridan, and it is very imaginative, i can see all the fishes in the seaweed!
    Hayley

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